The title - Nice and strong feeling\r\nFirst Paragraph - Tidy and neat, can use more sentimental words to improve as this is the first thing reader will tag with.\r\nSecond Paragraph - Tidy and neat\r\nThird Paragraph - Tidy and neat\r\nLast Paragraph - Can use more sentimental or strong feeling wording to end it and align with the title.\r\n